You have provided a minimal analysis of you research carried out, briefly outlining what you did and why, and mentioning how it informed some of your production. You have repeated the same points over and over, and not elaborated on what you included specifically and why.
You need to: 1) Elaborate on what type of questions you asked in your questionnaire, and examples of answers that you have included in your sequence and why 2) Give examples of what you learnt from your research and how you applied it to your production 3) Elaborate on how and why these different types od research would ensure that your thriller would appeal to your TA.
You have provided a minimal analysis of you research carried out, briefly outlining what you did and why, and mentioning how it informed some of your production. You have repeated the same points over and over, and not elaborated on what you included specifically and why.
ReplyDeleteYou need to:
1) Elaborate on what type of questions you asked in your questionnaire, and examples of answers that you have included in your sequence and why
2) Give examples of what you learnt from your research and how you applied it to your production
3) Elaborate on how and why these different types od research would ensure that your thriller would appeal to your TA.